Tuesday, April 24, 2012

Final Assessment


When we first started this course I didn’t think it was going to be like a normal EH101 course, and I was right it wasn’t. I was afraid we weren’t going to learn about the “normal” things a normal English class was going to learn about. I think in this class I have learned more than I would of learned in a “normal” English class.

The first major thing I learned in this course was to really think about why the writer is writing this piece. All writers have a reason why they choose to write a piece.  We see this in Stephen King’s On Writing. Through this book we learn about Stephen King and his life as an early writer. We go through his life as a child and into his later years. We learn about his mother, and his drug addiction. All these things play a massive role in being writer. In my post Inspiration I talk about how every person has their own inspiration for writing.

Secondly, I learned how to use my newfound writing skills in my other classes. I write about this in Essay Erosion post. I learned how to organize my thoughts correctly, and take my audience into consideration. I knew I wouldn’t be reading these essays I was writing for my history class, but my professor would be reading them.

I also saw improvement in organizing my thoughts in each blog post I did. Success is one of my best-organized posts. I try to organize my paragraphs by age. Starting when I was younger, and then leading into the present day. I also talk about how important school is to me. Not just only for my grades, but also being able to march. Passion is where I talk about why school is so important to me. I feel like my thoughts are organized pretty well in both of these blog posts.

Lastly, in Visualize I learned how to incorporate others ideas into my writing and into my work. In the DS106 course we had to take others ideas and do them ourselves. So it was like being in a class but not exactly. This course was extremely helpful in learning how to look at others ideas in relation to yours. I loved going through and looking at other people’s projects.

The last things I want to discuss are the few things I still have to work on in my writing. I have always known I have trouble with commas, and proof reading my paper. I always go back and reread it, but I guess I don’t know there are errors I have made because I was never taught about most of them. Hopefully I can learn to really look into my writing and catch my errors before I take my EH102 class. I feel like that is my biggest problem I have with writing.

This course has helped me with more than just normal writing techniques. It has taught me to look deeper into my writing and take other people beside myself into consideration. I’ve learned to take my audience into consideration, and I have learned to make my writing better through so many other things!




Tuesday, April 17, 2012

Dut Dut out!


So this week for my last DS106 assignment I did a video assignment. This assignment is called Self-Documentary. It is a short video about something that you do, like a hobby or something you enjoy. I decided to do something a little different this week, and when I found this assignment I thought I could do a good job on this.

So, I decided to do my blog post about guard. I could go on a rant about guard for days and days. My video is a little long, its about 20 minutes long, but I couldn’t fit the point of my video into 5 minutes.

In this video I refer to quite a few videos, the first video I refer to was my sophomore year. Our show Las Vegas was the first show I ever marched, and boy did I suck!  The second video I refer to is the first winterguard show I ever marched, entitled Truly Blessed. This show basically shaped me and made my guard career. It helped me through a lot, and showed me how a little hard work can go a long way! The third video I refer to was my junior year when I marched  Rhapsody 3. This year was absolutely amazing, and another big year in marching. We won 2 out of three competitions that year.  The next refer to was my last year with NCWG (North Cobb Winterguard) was when I marched A Story to tell. This was a good year also, not amazing, but not bad! And last but not least the final video I will share with you, entitled Fire&Ice, was my first year with The Marching Southerners. These are some of the most talented musicians and 400 of the  most amazing people I will ever meet!

My video Is a little long, but feel free to watch! I talk about a few things, like my best friend, and some of the people who inspired me! I couldn’t fit as much information into a short little video, so here it is,  and I hope you enjoy!


Tuesday, April 10, 2012

Breakup iTunes Song

I wasn't really sure what I was going to do for my assignment this week. I wanted to do something a little different, but i really wasn't sure what to do. I found this assignment in the visual assignments, and after I read more about the assignment I thought to myself  "Oh, this will be easy to do." I was wrong.

Trying to write a story with song titles is hard. You don't really have any words like the or of,  basically you are writing a story without any of these filler words. As I looked through my library of music I didn't want to make  my story super long but I didn't want it to be super short either. As I continued looking I started to pick out song titles that appealed to me, then realized my "Story" was starting to become about a break up. I pictured a male finding his girlfriend with another guy.

"This is the best day ever" was the start of the story from the very beginning. Then confessing "I don't love you" and "I know you know", as he catches her in the act. As he catches her, so ironically he tells her "Put some clothes on", "You've made your bed" "Playing the blame game." She had been blaming him for cheating on him, while the whole time she was cheating on him. He gives her a moment to explain, "Speak now, Im listening" then cuts her off with "I. D. G. A. F", obviously telling her that he doesn't care what she has to say.

The story just happened to come out the way it did. I guess it kinda stemmed from being cheated on in the past but either than that the story just developed. And I love how it came out. As I said before I thought this assignment would be really easy, but trying to put a story together out of song titles is difficult.


Tuesday, April 3, 2012

Eyeballing

So, for my first DS106 assignment I created my own assignment. Originally I was planning to do the Defamilurize assignment, but today when I was taking pictures of my boyfriend I got a photo of his eyes. I don't think I have ever seen such unique eyes. People think our eyes are one pure color, but they aren't. His eyes are green around the pupil and fade into a blue. Its extremely noticeable in the sunlight. I created this assignment and I am hoping people will find it interesting!